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【參考范文】
How toBeat the Computer Game Addiction
Nowadays, many young people like computer games. Some of themare even addicted to playing the games. It’s not good for our health to playcomputer games too much, especially for our eyes. Besides, when we are addictedto playing online games, we are wasting our valuable time. What’s more, it canmake us irritable, which is not conducive to the formation of a good familyatmosphere.
But how can we get rid of it? Here are some suggestions. Firstof all, we should shorten our online time and take part in some healthyactivities which can help us relax. In addition, we can develop other hobbiessuch as reading books and listening to music. Finally, we should spend moretime with our family instead of playing computer games.
All in all, getting rid of this bad habit and leading a healthylife do help young people to enjoy more.
【解析】
1.題干解讀:本文是一篇材料作文,要求以“如何戒除電腦游戲癮”為題寫一篇文章,重在分析沉迷電腦游戲的危害以及防止沉迷電腦游戲的建議。根據(jù)題目要求,需將材料中列出的“危害”全部展示,在“建議”中至少選擇三項(xiàng)。
2.寫作指導(dǎo):本文的主題是:如何防止沉迷電腦游戲;本文應(yīng)以第一人稱、一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主,闡述電腦游戲的危害以及針對(duì)性建議;寫作時(shí)要注意分段敘述,層次要清晰合理,可使用Firstof all、Finally等列舉內(nèi)容,使得文章脈絡(luò)清晰;此外還要注意要點(diǎn)齊全,語句表達(dá)順暢,使讀者一目了然。
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